Below are my refined images after the class critique.
Sections
I haven't changed my sectional views as the class didn't have any critiques to make and they demonstrate the user experience well, show the different layouts of the seperate spaces and situate the space.
Plan
I altered my floor plan image as the scale implied that my design was very large in relation to the site. The image now situates the space in relation to the road and some proposed surroundings.
Elevation
The elevation below shows the structure placed in the proposed site. I added doors to the structure from the previous elevation to make it more realistic.
Rendered full view of design
How structure looks from outside in full
perspective aerial view
This aerial view of the design situates the structure within Wallace Street on a map.
INside perspectives
Inside perspective of chamber shows entrance, roof and listening devices which hang down into space.
final document
Below are the final images with changes made to them. All changes made have been explained above.